▶️ S1.E6: Fourteen
Some families keep score differently.
There is a frequency between what you know and what you fear.
She remembered everything. You assumed she didn’t. That’s on you.
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The bolt slid home with a cheap metallic scrape.
Alex pressed his back against the thin motel door and listened. Just the groan of the ice machine down the hall, the hiss of tires on wet pavement, water ticking off the gutter outside.
He stayed there a moment, waiting for the room to settle around him. Then he moved.
He checked the window first, pulling the grimy curtain back just enough to see the lot. Rain. A flickering VACANCY sign. A gray sedan under a broken light. No one standing under the overhang. No headlights cutting in.
He let the curtain fall.
The room smelled like bleach, old smoke, and wet carpet. The bedspread had cigarette burns near one corner. A Gideons Bible sat warped on the nightstand. A dead moth floated inside the bathroom light cover.
Alex turned on the small, bolted-down television and kept the volume low. Static, then a local news anchor with too much makeup and a face already sliding toward the end of a long shift.
“...a grim discovery tonight in a rest stop just west of the city,” the anchor said. “Police are confirming this is the twelfth victim in the cross-state spree that began in...”
Alex stopped breathing.
Twelve.
His hand closed on the edge of the dresser. Twelve was his number. He had left his twelfth outside Flagstaff. A trucker. Quick. Quiet. Clean.
“The victim,” the anchor continued, “appears to have been bludgeoned, a significant deviation from the killer’s previous...”
Alex stared at the screen.
Bludgeoned?
No. That was sloppy. That was the kind of work you did when you got mad or lost control. He didn’t work like that.
The anchor kept talking. “...connecting this to the eleventh victim, found in Reno...”
Reno?
He looked at the screen like it owed him something. He hadn’t been in Reno. He’d been in Utah. A hiker in a state park. Orange rain shell. Bad knee.
Somebody was messing with his count.
He thought of Ben.
Ben liked style. Knives, usually. Arrangement. A body left with something extra for the cops to puzzle over while Ben was already three hundred miles away ordering breakfast. But even Ben didn’t do blunt-force. Too much mess. Too much noise.
A knock came at the door.
Alex jerked so hard the lamp rattled. He turned toward the sound and stood still.
Then it came again.
Not a knock. A rhythm.
Shave and a haircut.
Alex let out a breath and wiped his palms on his jeans. He unlatched the chain, turned the deadbolt, and opened the door.
Ben stood there smiling.
Same face, better upkeep. Hair dry. Collar straight. Dark coat still sharp through the rain. He smelled like expensive cologne and casino air.
“You look awful,” Ben said.
He stepped past Alex into the room and dropped a sleek leather duffel on the bed.
Alex locked the door behind him. “You’re late.”
“Vegas,” Ben said. “Traffic. Bad decisions. The usual.”
He glanced at the television. Then back to Alex.
“So,” he said. “Where’d you land?”
“Twelve.”
Ben smiled wider. “Funny thing. Me too.”
Alex kept looking at him. “Reno was you?”
Ben’s smile faded. “No.”
“The rest stop?”
“No.”
Alex said nothing.
Ben looked at the TV again. The anchor was talking over footage now. Flashing lights in rain. Troopers in ponchos. Yellow tape pulling in the wind.
Alex watched him. Ben’s face had gone flat. No grin now. No joke in it.
“So who the hell is it?” Alex said.
Another knock hit the door.
This one was different.
Three soft raps.
Tap. Tap. Tap.
Neither of them moved.
Ben’s hand slid down to the duffel.
Alex stared at the door.
“Yeah?” he said.
A woman’s voice came through the door. Clear. Calm.
“You always did need rules, Alex.”
Every muscle in his back locked.
“And Ben,” the voice said, “you always did think first meant best.”
Alex opened the door.
A woman stood there in the rain-dark light. Tall. Lean. Hair pulled back. Dark jacket zipped high. One sleeve had ridden up just enough to show a pale scar running down her forearm, the skin shiny and twisted.
The smell hit him before the memory did.
Gasoline.
Smoke.
Wet wood.
Something upstairs screaming.
Ben said it first.
“Chris.”
“Christine,” she corrected.
The woman smiled. Teeth showing. Nothing warm in it.
She stepped inside and Alex backed up without meaning to.
Ben didn’t take his hand off the duffel. “You’re supposed to be dead.”
She laughed under her breath. “That was the plan.”
She looked around the room. TV. Bed. Wet footprints. Bible. Cheap motel art bolted to the wall. Then she looked back at the two of them.
“You boys got old.”
Alex said, “Reno was you.”
“Yep.”
“The rest stop?”
“Uh-huh.”
“The others?”
Christine lifted one shoulder. “Some.”
Ben said, “You’ve been copying us.”
The corners of her mouth pulled back. "No. I've been catching up."
Ben laughed once.
Alex said, “Why?”
Christine looked at him like that was the first useful thing anybody had said all night.
“Because I wanted to see if you’d notice,” she said. “You didn’t. Not at first.”
Ben said, “You kept count.”
That pleased her. Alex could see it.
“Of course I kept count,” she said.
She lifted a hand and ticked off fingers.
“Reno. The rest stop. Tulsa. Amarillo, which I counted as one because I’m not an idiot. That got me to twelve before I even got here.”
Alex felt his throat tighten.
Ben smiled slowly. “You tied us on purpose.”
Christine nodded. “I got tired of hearing you fight when we were kids. Thought I’d settle it.”
Ben said, “I don’t buy twelve.”
“You don’t have to.”
“No one moves that fast.”
Christine laughed again. “That’s because you still think in highways and motel receipts.”
Ben leaned against the bed, one hand still on the duffel. “So what now?”
Christine looked at him.
“You still think this is about the fire.”
Ben laughed.
And there it was.
The old house. The spilled gas. The shouting. The game they made out of everything because that was what they always did. Her pink Caboodle busted open on the floor. Barrettes scattered across the carpet. A ring with a fake stone. Little plastic junk spread between them while she screamed upstairs. Who found more. Who won.
Christine saw it land in his face.
“There you are,” she said.
Alex said, “That was a long time ago, Chris.”
She turned to him, smiling like he’d done a trick for her. “Yeah, it was.”
She reached inside her jacket and took out a pistol with a suppressor on it.
Ben moved.
Not toward the door. Toward the duffel.
Christine shot him in the chest.
Pfft.
Ben hit the bed hard and rolled, one hand going to the wound. Surprise all over his face. Then the corner of his mouth twitched.
Alex turned for the bathroom.
Pfft.
The bullet went through his shoulder and spun him into the wall. His head cracked plaster. He slid to the floor with his hand over the heat coming out of him.
Christine walked to the bed and kicked Ben’s duffel open.
Knives. Tape. Zip ties. Clean shirt. Toothbrush.
She looked down and smiled. “Still packing like it’s summer camp.”
Ben coughed blood into his teeth. “Christine.”
Christine looked at him, delighted. “Yes.”
Alex stared up at her. “You’re insane.”
“Sure.”
She crossed to Alex and crouched in front of him. Pressed the cool muzzle to his cheek.
“What bothered me most,” she said, “wasn’t the fire.”
Her eyes were bright. Happy.
“It was hearing you two downstairs with my Caboodle dumped out between you.”
Alex tried to speak. Nothing came out.
Christine watched him try. She liked that too.
“For a minute,” she said to Alex, “I thought one of you might make this interesting.”
Then she shot him in the face.
Pfft.
His head snapped back against the wall and stayed there.
Christine stood.
Ben was still breathing. Barely. Wet little breaths. He looked gray already.
She sat beside him on the bed.
“Fuck you Christine.”
Christine picked up the Gideons Bible, turned it over once, and set it back on the nightstand.
“You just can’t help it, can you?” she asked.
She put her hand over the hole in his chest and felt him flinch. Her smile softened, which somehow made it meaner.
“You always needed an audience, that was your whole problem.”
She shot him through the eye.
Pfft.
He jerked once and was done.
The TV kept chattering about twelve victims, a cross-state spree, public caution, hotline numbers. The anchor’s mouth moved and moved.
Christine sat there one extra second with her hand still resting on Ben’s chest, looking at both bodies.
Then she stood up.
Muted the TV.
“Two more in here,” she said. “Fourteen total.”
At the door she stopped and looked back.
“I win.”